User talk:Sophiadef

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Crosby's Peer Review
I think your article has a good lead Sophia. But apart from that I'm not so sure about the external links. Your images are well placed and the article has good balance. The grammar is on point and your references are plenty given the vast amount of statistics you have shared. I do see a lack of bold words for emphasis. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cchigoche (talk • contribs) 02:21, 28 November 2017 (UTC)