User talk:Sophiafron99/New sandbox

really like the choice of information you included within your additions, these are sections/subtopics that are important but not really talked on within the original article. I don't think I quite understand how you cited your sources as I just see(copied from______) after sentences instead of actual citations that lead to the original source. I'm guessing this is just due to the fact that this is a draft and you will properly site when you are going to submit the real thing. The information you included all seems to be very relevant and important to the subject at hand. Due to the citing confusion, I'm unsure whether or not you've written original information (including paraphrasing statements you've found) or you've copied and pasted from different source. If you've just copied and pasted from different sources, I would just be careful to check on that in order to make sure you are not violating Wikipedia's plagiarism rules. Overall good additions just make sure you aren't violating any rules and cite properly when you submit the real thing. Ingrid.bodeen (talk) 14:43, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review by Ingrid Bodeen
I really like the choice of information you've included within your additions, these are sections/subtopics that are important but not really talked on within the original article. I don't think I quite understand how you cited your sources as I just see(copied from______) after sentences instead of actual citations that lead to the original source. I'm guessing this is just due to the fact that this is a draft and you will properly site when you are going to submit the real thing. The information you included all seems to be very relevant and important to the subject at hand. Due to the citing confusion, I'm unsure whether or not you've written original information (including paraphrasing statements you've found) or you've copied and pasted from different source. If you've just copied and pasted from different sources, I would just be careful to check on that in order to make sure you are not violating Wikipedia's plagiarism rules. Overall good additions just make sure you aren't violating any rules and cite properly when you submit the real thing.

Ingrid.bodeen (talk) 14:47, 22 October 2018 (UTC)