User talk:Sophianhurst/sandbox

Sophia - I like that you have edits on 5 different areas; it shows you have evaluated the entire article. Great suggestions for edits and I agree on adding information on where Snowden is today.DrTraceyHayes (talk) 22:11, 25 February 2020 (UTC)

Sophia, I think it would be great to update readers more about where Snowden is today. It might also be interesting to see if you can find any relevant information related to Snowden and the implications/considerations of his story and the upcoming presidential election. With him in Russia, it seems there might be articles of interest that would highlight the continued phenomenon of personal security and digital use. Personally, I watched the movie this week and was left with questioning what my 'digital track' would tell about me. This could also be an interesting angle to explore and highlight under the 'impact' section. Overall, great start--Good luck! -Gretchen Gkyoungren (talk) 04:49, 13 February 2020 (UTC)