User talk:Sophiatroia/Co-Cultural Theory

formatting and beginning article
hey, i just added a short little introduction starting point + some headings that we might want to follow. the headings i added are ones that i see commonly on other theory articles, so i figured it could be a good starting point for sections to add Yingtao Hanbao (talk) 01:14, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

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The main thing that I would suggest is to change the number points into subsections. This will make it easier for the reader to be able to separate between, for example, what one of the cores are and the description/explanation of the core. Also, the section called Co-Cultural Theory should be the overview, not a section. JAcosta2002 (talk) 19:15, 11 November 2022 (UTC)

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Hi! The only thing I would say so far is that if some images or pictures were incorporated it may enhance the understanding of the reader. Also, in the Theoretical Framework section, if possible I would suggest adding more info for each co-cultural orientation. Dominic D928 (talk) 04:19, 28 November 2022 (UTC)

Main ideas
to be honest, i dont think we need a whole section just for main ideas. i feel like it would make each section look really small. we could just put it in the first part with the intro Yingtao Hanbao (talk) 19:00, 6 December 2022 (UTC)