User talk:SophieLG7/sandbox

Article Peer Review

Reviewed by: AshAnnLee

Comments: The student added a lot of information to their page, especially in the architecture and history sections. The article was improved by adding reliable sources as well as fact checking the sources that were already apart of the article. The student corrected past information that was on the page and added an organized formatting. The student could improve the article by adding citations to each of the facts that are stated. They could also add more to their list of sources, to broaden the amount of information presented. Another way the student could improve their article would be to add links to specific vocabulary words that they used, such as "Lombard-Gothic style", "Latin cross", "Giovanni Battista Crespi". By adding links to these words the viewer would understand the topic of the article more thoroughly. Overall this article was improved greatly from the original state it started in, the topic is explained in depth and includes more relevant facts.

AshAnnLee (talk) 03:08, 30 November 2018 (UTC)