User talk:Sophieneville/Sophie Neville

I have read this through and I know that it is not suitable stylistically for a Wikipedia article in its current form. It would attract lots of comments about being "unencyclopedic" etc.. Basically it is written too much as a personal memoir. It would require a bit of rewriting into the 3rd person

There would also need to be some more specific in-line references (references for specific facts or opinions in the article inside a tag). Although there have been comments that IMDB is not a reliable source, that is only one person's opinion and you can certainly use it for basic filmography facts. Also if you have any pictures which are either free-use or you own and can release to the public domain, that would help improve the look etc. Let me know what you think and if you would like me to do a rewrite. Dabbler (talk) 23:30, 16 August 2011 (UTC)