User talk:Sophykbutt/Cannibalism in poultry/Sella rainbow Peer Review

PROS Overall, the content of the wiki edit was amazing, good job on the review. the flow was easy to follow, and the no grammatical error. also quite a lot of content you added there, Neutral tone and very reliable (amazing use of scholarly article) CONS There was no links to new articles, I didn't see a picture added to your sandbox. you might have added it to the original article (not entirely clear). also, there was heavy use of one literature for one section (cause). poultry cannibalism is a popular/common topic amidst poultry management, you should find more articles to buttress your point and not just use one article for section. Sella rainbow (talk) 21:07, 3 November 2019 (UTC)