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DYK nomination of Shammi (actress)
Hello! Your submission of Shammi (actress) at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Montanabw (talk) 07:06, 1 April 2014 (UTC) Good improvement made to the article. Surprised that there was no wiki article on such famous actress of India all these years. Some one put am image of hers from both 1950's and her latest photo in wiki.Sortlips (talk) 18:34, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

DYK nomination of Shammi (actress)
Hello! Your submission of Shammi (actress) at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Montanabw (talk) 03:36, 4 April 2014 (UTC) Sorry to bug you again, but if you see the comments at User_talk:Nikkimaria, another reviewer raised concerns that the article's wording is too closely copied/paraphrased from the original source. I'm afraid I have to rescind my earlier approval of the DYK nomination (sorry, don't kill the messenger!) I am too busy to help you fix this at the moment, though I think it IS fixable and encourage you to do so! Ethically Yours is traveling at the moment and can't help much until his/her return, but perhaps the two of you can work on the article some to address these concerns. Let me know on my talk when you think it is ready for another review. Montanabw (talk)


 * I'm not the one who pulled the approval. And if it's too closely paraphrased, then Nikki is right, it needs MORE rewriting. And, it's not our job to do it, it is yours and that of other editors who worked on the article (I may be able to help you a little, time permitting...) Sorry, but the rules about copyright violations here are very strict.  But we are eager to help you improve this article, as I agree, this is a very interesting person.  I'll keep an eye on it, but a couple things - one, don't use people's first names unless that's their ONLY name or their stage name... (i.e. "Harish", etc..) and put a space after commas.   Montanabw (talk) 05:08, 6 April 2014 (UTC)