User talk:Sotheara M

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This article is pretty close to WP:Original research, and doesn't offer any actual context for where and why he gave the speech, what impact it had, its lasting impact, etc. Too much of this article is just a summary of the speech, and the summary is not written in encyclopedic language, but more like a school essay on patriotism.

As an example of shorter but more encyclopedic coverage, check out this bit from Wiki's bio of Douglass: ''On July 5, 1852, Douglass delivered an address to the Ladies of the Rochester Anti-Slavery Sewing Society, which eventually became known as "What to the slave is the 4th of July?" It was a blistering attack on the hypocrisy of the United States in general and the Christian church in particular. (footnote: University of Rochester Frederick Douglass Project. . Retrieved on November 26, 2010.)''

I suggest you look at some other Wikipedia articles of famous speeches, and get a feel for how such articles are phrased and formatted, and what facts to include. This appears to be a valid topic and worth writing about, it just needs to be presented differently. Feel free to write me on my Talk page if you have any questions. MatthewVanitas (talk) 18:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Frederick Douglass's What to the Slave is the Fourth of July


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