User talk:Sottovoce77

== Your submission at Articles for creation: Lawrence Kramer (musicologist and composer) (October 3) ==  Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit if you feel they have been resolved.
 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Lawrence&.
 * To edit the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [ Articles for creation help desk], or on the [ . Please remember to link to the submission!
 * You can also get live chat help from experienced editors.
 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Hasteur (talk) 14:01, 3 October 2013 (UTC)

Lawrence Kramer (musicologist)
Hello Sottovoce77. I've accepted your draft and moved it to the above title, where you can continue to improve it. I have removed "composer" from the parenethetical disambiguator because he is primarily known as a musicologist. I have done some basic clean up of the article to conform to our Manual of Style and shortened one overly-long quote from a copyright source. However, you still need to work on the excessive amount of quoted material in the article as well as convert the bare links to proper references. Also please note that FaceBook should not be used as a reference. I have removed both instances of this and replaced one of them with a better source. Useful guides:
 * Identifying reliable sources
 * Quotations
 * Bare URLs

Best wishes, Voceditenore (talk) 11:36, 18 October 2013 (UTC)