User talk:Soullierek

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Hello, Soullierek, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hi! I read your sandbox draft and looked at your bibliography sandbox. I think you have good, reputable sources! Just make sure to transfer those over to the draft as you go.

I was having trouble differentiating which edits you’ve made, but it might be because I'm not sure how those are denoted since it is an existing article that you are improving.

I opened the original article and I think you can improve its writing/language. It's difficult to explain but it feels a bit editorialized and not the most objective in its presentation of facts, there are a lot of qualifiers. So I know that's not your work, but just wanted to suggest it in case you were unsure about changes to make to the existing information.

Routineless (talk) 14:47, 1 November 2022 (UTC)

Hello! I just wanted to let you know I left some comments on your article on Katherine Collins! It's really well organized, balanced, and has reliable citations and sources. I would just recommend maybe tweaking some of the language and leaving out some of the more personal details of Katherine's transition (i.e dead-name). Papaya99 (talk) 01:56, 29 November 2022 (UTC)