User talk:Sp14ud

I read through the article, Visual Impairment and there are a few things I would like to add:

First, I think the article would be more visually appealing if there were more pictures. Right now, there is only one picture, a visual representation of farsightedness. Maybe we could put in more diagrams of different types of visual impairment, like the farsighted diagram, so that the visual learners who read this could get an idea of what it looks like.

Second, I noted in the Cause section, that some of the causes have a definition, and others do not. Now, I know that you can click on the link to further research the cause, but I think it would be helpful if we can add a simple definition to each of the causes.

I also think that Epidemiology can be expanded. At the moment, it contains limited information, and I think it can be extended with more stats and research about the age, gender and geography.

One last thing. In the Treatment section, under the ‘Other Aids’ subtitle, I would like to add information about seeing eye dogs. When I read the subtitle of ‘Other Aids,’ it immediately came to my mind, and then I realized that it wasn’t part of the article, so that can also be extended.

Sp14ud (talk) 03:02, 17 September 2014 (UTC)