User talk:Spark5

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Hello, Spark5, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hey Thomas, just read your outline here and it sure looks like you're off to a great start! Your organizational skills are off the chart, your page already looks like a legit Wikipedia page! I recommend perhaps using multiple and a wide variety of sources when writing your paper, so you can avoid any biases and make sure you are presenting the most accurate data. Another thing you could perhaps add is what sort of behaviours are associated with each factor. Overall you're doing an awesome job, can't wait to read the final piece!

Cheers,

Seongwoo