User talk:Spark5/sandbox

Hello Seongwoo, I have read your outline for your topic of Dependent Personality Disorder, and I think you are off to a great start.

You have some very interesting information. I encourage you to add all your sources, maybe find another source contributing to your topic to avoid any biases from the writer of that source, and ensure they are all academic sources.

Some other interesting topics about DPD could be maybe what causes DPD? the demographic it is most prevalent in? the effectiveness of treatment? other methods of treatment?

I look forward to seeing your completed article. Best of luck Seongwoo.

Cheers,

Thomas LeGallais Peer EDIT
Hey there Seongwoo, I read your article on Dependent Personality Disorder and you are certainly headed in the right direction. I think the detail is is real good and you did a good job developing the certain causes and treatments of this disorder. It impressed me how organized and well structured your article is and your use us sub-titles throughout. I think where you lack is your number of sources. From what you put on the article there was only a single source. My advice would be to get several sources and take an even amount of information from each to avoid certain biases and also ensure that the information is valid. Perhaps you could go into more detail on the sub-types instead of just one sentence! I also recommend looking into Theodore Millon and his contributions towards DPD! Overall, you are definitely headed in the right direction and I'm positive your final paper will be amazing! Thomas LeGallais