User talk:Sparmer

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Peer Review for China Club of Seattle
The information in your lead was really clear, but maybe you could begin the lead with the economic/cultural goals of the organization rather than who the club was founded by, because that would give a more immediate sense of what the club was about. The second sentence in the background/history section is a bit confusing - do you mean developing trade networks between seattle and asia? I like your organization, but I'm not sure if the education and internationalism subsection in economic goals and business advocacy belong in that section or if it should go in the politics section instead. You also had a lot of good secondary sources for your information. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Minastudent (talk • contribs) 02:18, 2 December 2016 (UTC)