User talk:Spaz1998/sandbox

Hello just wanted to give you feedback on your article. So I understand that this is a draft but don't forget that it needs to be in paragraph form. In the beginning of this article maybe you can talk about her personally and how she came to be. What made her want to be become an activist? Also towards the end of the article make sure that you mention her importance and why is she worth studying. From what I understand, Jill Moss Greenberg is an activist so maybe mention her accomplishments and how she contributed to society. What did Greenberg fight for and what is her purpose that she wants people to see. Another important thing make sure that you use credible sources. There is a rubric on blackboard so this can help guide you and your partner. Overall the facts looks good. good start