User talk:Spencerborotsik/sandbox

Peer Review
This article contains a good amount of information on a subject which is incredibly difficult to find reliable sources towards. However, I would argue that the language and writing style used in this article is choppy and oftentimes can be difficult to focus when reading. These short sentences can be combined to improve the flow of the article. All in all, the article needs work, but that's what we're doing with this assignment, so there's my advice.