User talk:Sperrin2023

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Hello, Sperrin2023, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hello! Here is a peer review to help you get started with this article. I just had some feedback I think might be helpful. First of all, I noticed that your article doesn't seem to have a lot of body to it. I think you could definitely successfully add a lot to this article, which is great. I think a great way to do this could be through adding subheadings and organizing more about your person. This will make it easier for readers to digest information. Finally, I think that the direct quotes in this article somewhat detract from the flow. I think that these quotes could be supported and summarize other ideas in better ways, such as through the addition of sources to support the quotes ideas. I hope this is somewhat helpful!

Juliakalei (talk) 02:11, 3 March 2020 (UTC) Julia