User talk:Speters28

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Hello, Speters28, and welcome to Wikipedia! I'm looking forward to your your contributions to Observational learning. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on talk pages using four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place  before the question. Again, welcome! Lova Falk    talk   18:59, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
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1/1 The student has improved the quality of the information available in this article; Yes, the person has. Their main focus has broadened the article and I feel it has helped the page quite a bit. 1/1 The student has improved the clarity and/or organization of the content; By adding further subheadings etc it helps to organize the paper, allowing easier clarification as well as finding information quickly. 1/1 The student has clearly explained the method and findings of an empirical paper; Definitely. It is well written, and there is a lot on the paper, allowing further aid to the article. 1/1 The student has correctly cited the empirical paper according to Wikipedia guidelines, and the paper is appropriate (i.e., it is an empirical study on development published the results in an academic journal)

Comments and Suggestions for Improvement: In the future I would like to see a bit more information added, but other than that you did a fabulous job. I feel that it does improve the article quite a bit. Another thing to just keep in mind is make sure you check 'show preview' to make sure you catch any errors before posting them to the page, that way it is not for the world to see. Great job and keep it up :) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Smckeo3 (talk • contribs) 13:30, 8 November 2012 (UTC)