User talk:Spirit of wallace

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William Wallace and Elderslie
Hi. Thank you for your contributions to the William Wallace and Elderslie articles. However, I need to tell you why I reverted them. This is for a number of reasons.

Foremost, it is because they read as original research without any cited sources. Wikipedia must source its content from existing publications, it cannot consist of your own person analysis. Stating that you are editing on behalf of the The Society of William Wallace does not excuse you the need to produce sources, and actually further suggests that you are using the society's original research, something not permitted in an encyclopaedia.

It was also of an unencyclopaedic tone; editorialising, addressing the reader "we", referring to the writer "I", and was generally not neutrally expressed.

If you can find some good reliable sources that you can use to cite what you added, then please re-add it, but this time try and keep a neutral and factual tone. Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks. -- Escape Orbit (Talk) 21:15, 3 December 2013 (UTC)