User talk:Spjujhm

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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! MatthewVanitas (talk) 16:08, 29 November 2012 (UTC)

This is a very good start indeed, it just needs a larger body of sourcing. Can you add a few citations of media coverage which verifies some of the facts (like the award they received). Maybe some further mention of the social impact as seen by news media or academics? Just something to get some viewpoint from outside NIH.

Also minor thing, only put one space after punctuation; using 2 spaces after a period or colon is a typewriter-era anachronism that's unnecessary in most computing contexts.

Please flesh out the coverage with a few more sources, properly footnoted, and we'll be good to publish. MatthewVanitas (talk) 16:08, 29 November 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 National Psychosis Unit, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you are more than welcome to continue submitting work to Articles for Creation. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Gigs (talk) 01:50, 15 December 2012 (UTC)
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