User talk:SportsWriter92

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Phil de Picciotto (April 6)
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EROS message 13:49, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Submission
Greetings. There are some minor problems with your article. Firstly, please read WP:CITE and WP:REFB to improve your citations. Next, to your question. More citations are needed to be inclined. This is because, the article you are writing is a biography. Every point is needed to be inclined with citation for further reference. When a factual conflict arrises, your inclined citation will be evidence to reinforce and defend the points you write about. For example, the first paragraph of your "Early Life" section is not inclined with any citation. Same goes for many paragraphs in your subsequent sections. Cheers. EROS message 09:26, 10 April 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Phil de Picciotto has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Phil de Picciotto. Thanks! WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 20:20, 3 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Phil de Picciotto (June 13)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Basie was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Phil de Picciotto and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Phil de Picciotto, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Basie (talk) 10:31, 13 June 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Phil de Picciotto has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Phil de Picciotto. Thanks! EROS message 11:11, 18 July 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Phil de Picciotto


Hello, SportsWriter92. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, Draft:Phil de Picciotto.

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it. —&thinsp;JJMC89&thinsp; (T·C) 09:58, 19 January 2019 (UTC)