User talk:Spsjaggy1

Hello! This is my Talk Page. Thanks for stopping by...keep those cards and letters coming! Spsjaggy1 (talk) 03:48, 29 October 2017 (UTC)

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Welcome to Wikipedia
Glad you were able to join Spsjaggy1. I look forward to seeing what else you edit! FULBERT (talk) 03:17, 25 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks! So far, so good. Spsjaggy1 (talk) 05:50, 29 October 2017 (UTC)

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Welcome to Wikipedia
I see you have already been busy learning about this. Fantastic! FULBERT (talk) 15:27, 29 October 2017 (UTC)
 * I like how you are organizing your User: page; should get you to help me with mine, too! FULBERT (talk) 17:01, 29 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks! The Help:Table tutorial was informative...but still need to learn more about advanced formatting! Spsjaggy1 (talk) 17:05, 29 October 2017 (UTC)

Content explanation
Hi! I wanted to give you an overview of the sourcing you used. As explained on the article's talk page, some sources aren't seen as reliable because they either accept money to write glowing articles about a person or company, or they don't verify or really edit their contributor content. (In general, anything that accepts payment for writing an article is traditionally not seen as reliable - there are some exceptions, but they're uncommon.) I believe that Adweek should be good, as should Business Week, but be careful how you use it.

Now when it comes to how content is written, be extremely careful to avoid any content that would be seen as promotional or non-neutral. For example, the sentence "By creating advertising that combines stories about innovation with humor, the company is able to promote the importance of its technology focus to an audience that may not be aware of its involvement in the domain."

This is definitely seen as promotional or at the very least, non-neutral. Things like "promote the importance" are seen as WP:PUFFERY on Wikipedia.

Another way to phrase the paragraph would be something like this:

In 2015 GE began running a series of content marketing campaigns intended to attract potential employees and highlight its work with digital industrial transformation. Their first campaign, "What’s the Matter with Owen?" was created through a partnership with BBDO and focused on a new GE employee talking to his friends and family about his programming job. BBDO and GE released two more spots in 2017, "What if female scientists were celebrities?" and "Meet Molly, the Kid Who Never Stops Inventing", which were intended to support the organization's initiative to promote STEM careers for women and achieve gender balance within its workforce. The first spot featured physicist Mildred Dresselhaus and aired during the 2017 Academy Awards.

This makes the content more neutral - this needs more tweaking, but it's a good start. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:41, 1 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Spsjaggy1 (talk) 16:12, 12 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Hoping this means Spsjaggy1 that you will continue editing in your areas of interest and knowledge! FULBERT (talk) 16:33, 16 December 2017 (UTC)

A smile for you
 Hello Spsjaggy1, Not a very active user has smiled at you! Smiles promote WikiLove and hopefully this one has made your day better. Spread the WikiLove by smiling at someone else, whether it be someone you have had disagreements with in the past or a good friend. Go on, smile! Cheers, and happy editing! Not a very active user (talk) 10:43, 28 March 2018 (UTC) Smile at others by adding {{subst:Smile}} to their talk page with a friendly message.