User talk:Srg18405/7 Year Bitch

For Sydney
Ecs222 (talk) 03:25, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
 * This looks good, but you need sources for the intro sentences you added.
 * Be sure that everything is sourced using the correct format (use the template in the editor; review the training or Google how to add in text citations).
 * The last sentence of the intro is a bit awkward (but it's a great piece of info!) and the tone is bordering on commentary; rephrase or consider removing 'interesting enough'.
 * The article could still use a bit more, if you can find anything else.

For Jenna
Ecs222 (talk) 03:35, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
 * You need to have complete source details for the references, and use the template in the editor to add the in text citations (which will automatically produce the reference list).
 * The article could really use a few more sources to back up what's there - try to find at least one more! Try music magazines, or possibly academic journals about music, punk, feminist music, riotgrrl... there's a journal about almost everything.


 * Response to suggestions for Jenna^
 * I have added the date for my source in the aftermath section, but that appeared to be the only missing part of the citation (source 3). I also added some information about Riot Grrrl in the introduction (source 1) and added the source information. Please let me know if this needs any further changes before we can move it live! Thanks! Jm3028 (talk) 02:59, 2 December 2020 (ECT)


 * Okay, that sounds good! Ecs222 (talk) 17:10, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

For Gabby (and and Sydney)
Ecs222 (talk) 03:42, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Can you clarify what each of you added? I can't tell from the edit history and what you each submitted (how you explained the contributions you made) sounded similar - please let me know by copying and pasting what you each did into your individual draft pages and then resubmitting, or by adding your names after your contributions on the group draft and then submitting the link again so I can look it over. Please do this asap (by Wednesday).

Peer reviews
If you add "Amelia_Peer_Review" to the link for this page, I have posted my peer review. It is on the Talk page for that link. Hope it helps!AmvBav196 (talk) 04:03, 26 October 2020 (UTC)