User talk:Sriley11/Association for Women in Architecture and Design

The first few lines read a little bit like a story as opposed to a factual statement: "In 1915 four female architect students from Washington University in St. Louis were rejected from the male architectural fraternity. These women, Helen Milius, Mae Steinmesch, Jane Pelton, and Angela Burdeau created their own architectural sorority called La Confrerie Alongine."

If you were to phrase this in a more direct manner like: "In 1915, Helen Milius, Mae Steinmesch, Jane Pelton, and Angela Burdeau were rejected from the male architectural fraternity at Washington University. They then created their own architectural sorority called La Confrerie Alongine."

Other than that minor tonal issue these all seem pretty good, and backed up by quality sources! Oh Im Sunny (talk) 00:58, 19 March 2021 (UTC)Oh Im Sunny