User talk:Srios10/Child marriage in South Sudan/DrGooner14 Peer Review

Ahmad's Peer Review
This article does many things well. It brings light to the issues of child marriage in South Sudan historically, effectively demonstrating the consequences and causes of the issue. Room for heavy improvement that I see as an issue is the lack of compelling data or tabling depicting the statistics of child marriage in Southern Sudan, I would love to see that topic expanded on how it affects the lack of education and political involvement. Also combatting the lack of child marriage such as changing laws and the constitution would be something to look into as well as what their constitution says about that. The article is well organized, it is just very condensed, and more research can be expanded on the topic, but well done thus far. As a reader of child marriage, I would like to know the median age of men and women when they get married and how effective these marriages are, the reasons why they occur, and the divorce rates would all be factors to further expand the topic. All in all well done!

(Ahmad)