User talk:Srlerner/sandbox

Instructor comments
Although you have made some clear improvements to the article, it doesn't seem like they do much to move it beyond its current Stub class. Is there a new section that could be added to expand it? Alternatively, could you take a critical look at the statements about the relative durability of concrete made with portland and Rosendale cements? At a minimum, the references that you found should be integrated as footnotes or further reading. Elizabeth Linden Rahway (talk) 13:05, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * See also peer review comments in User:Agfagf2018/sandbox. Elizabeth Linden Rahway (talk) 02:36, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for the comments, as we discussed yesterday I will be adding a substantial amount of new material very soon. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Srlerner (talk • contribs) 20:31, 7 December 2018 (UTC)