User talk:Srr0322/sandbox

Traci's Peer Review
Great Job on your rough draft! It looks like your pretty much done. I enjoyed reading the article and you have your information in an easy to read order and it defiantly,is balanced. The only problem I saw is sometimes it becomes a little wordy. For example," He has worked..". I think it would sound better if you took out the has. Overall the grammar looks great. Keep it up! Traci

Srr0322 Peer Evaluation
When evaluating this article, I found that the structure was well organized and easy to follow. The lead stated was informative, helping lead the way for the rest of the article. The information given was neutral. I really liked the organization of the article and will incorporate that into mine. Jkg018 (talk) 00:44, 30 October 2018 Jaxxon Grisham

Srr0322 Peer Review by Emily
I really enjoyed reading your article. There is a clear, easy to follow structure. I also found that the content was generally neutral. There were several reliable sources, including an official website. The beginning of the article was attention grabbing, so way to go! Sections are balanced well. Overall I thought this article is good!

-Emily Ellis