User talk:SrushtiPai/sandbox

Hello! I'm here to add a peer review. I noticed your sandbox is empty at this point, however. Would you please update it? I did see you contributed one line to the page, and I do think it's important to emphasize a dominatrix is not (typically) a prostitute. It does appear major points are already addressed on the page. They talk about some notable dominatrices in history. Maybe you can write about some more recent or current dominatrices which have made notable contributions to the BDSM community. Martijn Koning IIT (talk) 01:09, 7 November 2019 (UTC)

Final wiki contribution comments: Overall good content added, though it was fairly short, especially considering all the quotes. At least one quote was not needed - “the kind of feminist who supports the right of any man or women to work as a prostitute, if it is their free choice.” There were some small things to improve clarity that I edited directly in your page. But overall good content. Nlegate (talk) 20:30, 10 December 2019 (UTC)