User talk:Ss5243

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Hello, Ss5243, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Sacramento Perch Outline
Here are the edits I will be making to the current Wikipedia page on the Sacramento Perch (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sacramento_perch)

Headings:
 * Taxonomy - Here I will talk about this fish's place in the tree of life.
 * Description - Here I will talk about the fish's appearance.
 * Distribution - Here I will talk about where this species is found.
 * Diet - Here I will describe what this fish eats.
 * Breeding Pattern - Here is where I will describe how this fish reproduces.
 * Status- Here is where I will explain this fish's status as an endangered species, its use in aquaponics, and restoration efforts to reintroduce this species into its historic habitat.

Outline feedback
Hi Steph,

This looks like a pretty good start but I'm still left wondering how this is going to tie back to our class topics (maybe this can be related to their native habitat and how that's changed?). Please clarify before you go too far into the research.

Julianfulton (talk) 22:02, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi Dr. Fulton,

Thank you for your feedback. I was planning on explaining how this fish became endangered due to human interference with the central valley waterways and how much Californians have changed the Sac perch's native habitat such as the San Joaquin river. Is this okay?

Wikilinks
Hi, please go a little easy on the wikilinks. I have removed the majority of the links you inserted in Sacramento perch because they either a) linked to everyday concepts that are not normally linked because it clutters up the text, or b) to disambiguation pages which should not be linked to at all. Consider only linking pages that treat concepts that may be unfamiliar to the reader or contain material that is directly relevant. Cheers!-- Elmidae  (talk) 12:11, 22 April 2016 (UTC)