User talk:Sschieren

Welcome!
Hello, Sschieren, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback
Hi! Your professor wanted me to give you some feedback on your edits. This looks to be one of your largest and most recent edits, so I'll give feedback on this. It looks pretty good, my only note is to just be careful about phrasing. There's nothing problematic about it, it just could be rephrased here and there to flow a little better. Otherwise it looks pretty solid. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 01:55, 24 April 2017 (UTC)