User talk:Sshack2/Gender script

Gender Script Revision
The draft is great! I understood the concept well and the points made on the subject really complement each other and add to value to the topic. I'm not sure if I understood it right but be sure to check if you can directly cite in Wikipedia. The first paragraph is really strong but perhaps you can shorten or eliminate quotes so the writer's voice (in an objective tone of course) could be more present in the text. Good work!

Feminista del Caribe 22 (talk) 20:24, 11 October 2022 (UTC)

Really loved this, and loved that you used quotes to further explain the theory. Make sure to cite directly in your Wiki sections (though this could just be because it is a draft).--Latterrior (talk) 19:52, 12 October 2022 (UTC)