User talk:Sshafe2

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reply from Hongcheng Guo
Thank you for your time and review. The red link means that there is currently no articles on that term (I added it intentionally) but I will give an explanation as you suggested. Thanks. Hongcheng Guo (talk) 07:53, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

review
I posted this on your sandbox talk page earlier, but I'll post it on your personal talk page too. Hey Sultan Shafei, your page is shaping up very nicely! You managed to detail the hydrocarbon aspect of your basin extensively, which is very interesting. Your page is well written, and I feel that you included enough links and descriptions so that non geoscientists people can get a good understanding of your basin. I feel like you could change up the order of your sections and include the natural resource portions towards the end of the page and the tectonic development section closer to the front. In the geology section you included that the Arabian Plate tectonic origin is grouped into six phases and listed the phases, but you didn't explain the phases. It could be beneficial to expand upon each phase so that the reader gets more in-depth knowledge of the region's history. You might want to include some more general information about your basin such as the rate of expansion, beta factor, how deep the basin is.Drau1 (talk) 16:28, 23 February 2015 (UTC)