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Speedy deletion nomination of Department of Infrastructure and Industrial Development (Uttar Pradesh)


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Speedy deletion nomination of Department of Home (Uttar Pradesh)


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Ways to improve Rajiv Gauba
Hi, I'm Boleyn. SshibumXZ, thanks for creating Rajiv Gauba!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. PLease add categories.

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Boleyn (talk) 19:35, 30 August 2017 (UTC)

Improve GK
You believe that Mr,Rajiv Gauba is present Home secretary,And believe that Mr.Rajiv Mehrishi is not present CAG of India, Than definitely problem with your mind, Because as per my knowledge there is only one can set on the post of home secretary,two person can not serve for one post. Kartik Patel (talk) 17:44, 5 September 2017 (UTC) I hope this clears your doubts, and, by the by, I believe that my General Knowledge about these particular subjects is sufficient. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions) 19:07, 5 September 2017 (UTC).
 * I think you are very poor in GK,
 * . Thank you for your concerns. But I am afraid your concerns are greatly unfounded.
 * I have never said, or even implied that the Office of Home Secretary of India is being occupied two different individuals.
 * Rajiv Gauba indeed is the incumbent Union Home Secretary.
 * And like wise, Rajiv Mehrishi, currently, isn't the CAG of India.
 * There's no correlation between the two. Rajiv Mehrishi, at this point of time holds no office. He superannuated from IAS on 30 August 2017. Though he's likely to become the CAG of India, when the incumbent, Shashi Kant Sharma demits office on 24 September 2017 i.e. when he attains the age of 65. But as of today, Rajiv Mehrishi is not holding any office, constitutional or otherwise.
 * CAG is a constitutional office, one can't be removed from the office, unless, of course, one is impeached by the Parliament of India.

Thank you for your details but I have read this article regard appoint of Rajiv mehrishi to CAG of India,so I put it on wikipedia. Kartik Patel (talk) 06:51, 7 September 2017 (UTC)
 * . No worries and you need not thank me. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions) 22:21, 7 September 2017 (UTC).

Ways to improve Sunil Arora
Hi, I'm Domdeparis. SshibumXZ, thanks for creating Sunil Arora!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. The subject requires more sources to prove notability. he is an appointed civil servent and the sources are almost exclusively routine announcements of his appointment.

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Domdeparis (talk) 15:12, 7 September 2017 (UTC)


 * . First of all, thank you for reviewing Sunil Arora. Secondly, I would say that the subject is notable, as he's occupying a Constitutional Office. Be that as it may, I have added a few more secondary sources, so, can you check and tell, if the article now clears the bar? Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions) 22:21, 7 September 2017 (UTC).
 * Hi just occupying a constitutional office does not make him automatically notable. Notability is not inherent or inherited. Even elected politicians have to meet WP:GNG. I may be mistaken of course so if you have a guideline or policy that supports automatic notability for those occupying constitutional offices I would be very interested. i'll have a look at those other sources and see if the notability tag can come off now. Domdeparis (talk) 09:02, 8 September 2017 (UTC)
 * I had a look and the sources are really what is needed especially the Indiatoday one. Domdeparis (talk) 09:11, 8 September 2017 (UTC)
 * . Thank you for explaining the General Notability Guidelines of Wikipedia, I would be sure to add secondary sources like the India Today one in the articles I create henceforth. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 04:13, 9 September 2017 (UTC)

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I have updated the Defence Secretary to describe him as a civil servant rather than politician, after reconsidering the content. Defence Secretary is often a political position in many nations, so the IAS aspect was missed. When multiple articles with the same name are involved, the article names should be "disambiguated" unless there is clearly a primary topic, and there could be potentially other articles about persons named Sanjay Mitra. WP:PRIMARYTOPIC has further background about this. Dl2000 (talk) 05:32, 10 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Also, I went through WP:PRIMARYTOPIC (just glanced through, haven't read it thoroughly), and indeed I was wrong. Also, thank you for making the world a better place by using `use dmy dates` template on articles! :P Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 13:46, 10 January 2018 (UTC)

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Re: Provincial Civil Service (Uttar Pradesh)
✅. As there are not many WP: RS about PCS, the article is still relatively short. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 01:15, 18 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Just edit Major concerns and Reforms section and any other that you feel necessary.
 * ✅. Would add more content later.
 * Is List of Union Home Secretaries available?
 * No, at least to the best of knowledge, no. I tried searching through MHA, PIB and GoI archives and couldn't find anything. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 16:27, 19 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Please also make adequate edits in Department of Urban Development (Uttar Pradesh) and Department of Housing and Urban Planning (Uttar Pradesh) Bharat.varsh (talk) 13:45, 22 January 2018 (UTC)
 * let me see. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 13:54, 22 January 2018 (UTC)
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 * Oh, ok. No worries. Thanks for clarifying! Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 08:25, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

Vikash Maharaj
The Vikash Maharaj article seems to have some issues, and I'd urge a little caution in linking to it at the moment, which is partly why I undid your edit of Uttar Pradesh (in addition to the "best known artists" test). Batternut (talk) 17:30, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
 * No worries. I should have checked the article first. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 18:11, 28 January 2018 (UTC)

Indian Administrative Service
Hi SshibumXZ, I've largely completed the copy edit of the article. Please have a read over of it and see if the text matches up with the sourcing appropriately. Although I've generally checked the source, I'm sure I've missed a thing here or there. Let me know if it needs any fine tuning. Cheers. Blackmane (talk) 13:17, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
 * from the looks of it, the article has improved vastly. I would do a deeper check later, but for now, I can’t find anything missing/wrong with the article.
 * Thanks for the thorough c/e, I think now it can pass the GA review, whatcha reckon? Thanks again for accepting my c/e request. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 13:30, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Worth giving it a shot, always best to get an extra couple sets of eyes on an article to see what else can be done to improve it. I'll remove the GOCE tag and mark it as done at the Requests page. Cheers. Blackmane (talk) 13:59, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Reliable sources
Tx for input. So basically, you are telling my that a national register of commerce and the Financial Times are considered as NON reliable by the Wikipedia community. Kindly clarify. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Al ashton (talk • contribs) 16:24, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi. Financial Times is a reliable source, but as per WP: RS, only passing mentions don't contribute to notability. As far as National Register of Commerce is WP: Primary Source and has to be backed up by a reliable secondary source. For further info read; WP: Citing sources. I know you may find all this a bit complicated, and maybe even absurd, I too experienced all this when I started (as you may be able to guess by looking through this talk page), but trust me, you'd get used to it. If you have any other issues, I would be more than happy to help. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 16:31, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Request on 19:26:44, 31 January 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Wikisubmitter
Hi, the article you declined has multiple references from industry analysts, industry publications, and publicly-traded companies. Why was it declined for lack of reliable references? Wikisubmitter (talk) 19:26, 31 January 2018 (UTC)

Wikisubmitter (talk) 19:26, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 * first of all, sorry for the delayed response, my internet isn't too good at the moment. Secondly, as far as your draft goes, barring the lack of reliable sources, it's impressively well built for a first timer, so I'd like you to read up on WP: Reliable Sources, that should give you a fair idea. Once you add two-three reliable sources to your draft, it'd be ready to be published, all the best! Again, sorry for the delay in response. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 11:08, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

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12:58:54, 14 February 2018 review of submission by ArtofSuiting
Hi there,

Hussein is a notable Canadian Fashion designer along the lines of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Christopher_Bates_(fashion_designer) or https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beaufille. The Canadian fashion industry is growing and becoming more and more well known worldwide and these are all notable people in the industry.

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ArtofSuiting (talk) 12:58, 14 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Hello, notability isn’t inherent on Wikipedia, for any article you create, adequate sources have to be provided to back up your claims. These sources have to be reliable and secondary, and passing mentions in a reliable sources won’t do. I encourage you to read up on WP:RS. I know this may seem a bit complicated right now, but once you get the hang of it, it actually can be fun. All the best! Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 18:48, 14 February 2018 (UTC)

Identity Management
This should not be read as insulting or diffamatory. Just making a point about self-complacency. You provide 2 generic high-level references that do not clarify the question about source validity (e.g. "do not combine material from multiple sources" whereas you recommend to duplicate sources"). In a nutshell, same old story whenever, new material needs to be created; those who suffered beforehand do everything possible to have other enjoying the same feeling. Not the principle behind Wikipedia's creation. In law, we call it the spirit and the letter. Kindly validate my contribution since you appeared being the editor-in-chief.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Al ashton (talk • contribs) 13:14, 15 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi from what I can infer, you seem to be insinuating that I am too much on the side of policies and hence can't understand the spirit of Wikipedia. That may very well be the case, but, in my opinion, Wikipedia policies, in general, should be respected. Also, as for me being the editor-in-chief of Wikipedia, that is not the case, everyone, at least in theory, is equal on Wikipedia. As for the article, Identity management, I had a look at it, and, barring the lack of additional sources, it looks fine, any particular thing you want me to look at? Again, I would be more than happy to help you out with any problem(s) you may have.
 * By the way, it's hard to take something as not being defamatory, when its motive is to be defamatory. Just a thought. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 14:08, 15 February 2018 (UTC)

00:18:02, 15 February 2018 review of submission by Wikisubmitter
Hi @SshibumXZ, thanks for your feedback. I added a link to a Wall Street Journal article, which I believe Wikipedia considers to be a reliable source. Also, I should note that Gartner and Forrester, both previously referenced, are perhaps the two most respected analyst firms in this information technology space. Does this suffice to re-review and approve the draft for publication?

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 * Hi yes, Wall Street Journal is considered to be a reliable source, and, as the article already had references from Gartner and Forrester, I think that it may pass both WP: GNG and WP: Company. Still though, I would advice you to try to make further improvements to the article before you resubmit it for review, these may be general improvements like improvements in tone, style, grammar et al., you may, if you want to, also expand the draft. All in all, the draft is already eligible for resubmission, but it still can do with another round of improvements. All the best! Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 14:17, 15 February 2018 (UTC)

00:12:09, 16 February 2018 review of submission by Dmfennell
Hi! Thanks for reviewing my draft page on the IPSF. If you have any more specific feedback, please let me know. I modeled this page after the pages of other federations on wikipedia which often draw many facts from the webpage of the federation itself. When I asked for help from a previous reviewer, they indicated the topic was noteworthy and sources not a problem, but wanted me to change the tone. Over time, I added in sources that were peer-reviewed about pole sports, more news articles about the IPSF, links to associated federations under their umbrella organization, and more. I have also changed the tone. There are other pole related organizations covered on wikipedia but they are not the one recognized by GAISF. That is one reason why I thought this page was notable and worth having up, not to mention how the IPSF has basically been a major player in the sportifcation of a dance associated with exotic dance clubs. For my day job, I am a social scientist, so I have found other primary sources but those are not appropriate to cite on wikipedia so I have omitted them. However, since I received your feedback, I added in more sources and information. I also added sections back into the page and more links to other wikipedia pages. If you have further feedback, please let me know as I would really like to get this right and move on to other endeavors haha. Thanks! Dmfennell (talk) 00:12, 16 February 2018 (UTC) Dmfennell (talk) 00:12, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi I had a look at your draft, and now it easily passes WP: General Notability Guidelines, so, you can move on to other articles without worrying about the draft of IPSF.
 * I would accept the draft if no other reviewer does so within the next 12 hours or so. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 00:23, 16 February 2018 (UTC)

Oh, thanks for the fast response and help. I don't think anyone else has looked at it, so if you could accept it that would be awesome. Dmfennell (talk) 14:51, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 22:34, 16 February 2018 (UTC)

Speedy Deletion of several files
Zak Kuhr Adrian Mayes (American football coach) Kyle Hoke Jules Montinar

I work for the university where the "copyrighted" material came from. I would gladly reword but I do not want to have to re-create the boxes with coaching history... Can you re-instate the old versions so I can fix ASAP.Americanfootballupdater (talk) 22:05, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Hello, I wasn't the one who deleted your drafts, I just tagged one of them for speedy deletion because of copyright violations, drafts, and other pages on Wikipedia, are deleted by an administrator, in your case:, you can raise a request on his talk page for a refund, but bear in mind copyvio content is almost always sent via mail and isn't allowed to be published on Wikipedia before the objectionable content is removed, so, make sure to have an email account linked to your account.
 * Also, even though you or any of your affiliates own the copyvio content, there's no way to verify it. See: Donating copyrighted materials, and maybe even Conflict of interest, as you have mentioned that you work for the university that owns the copyvio content. All the best! Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 22:34, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I appreciate the help. Our coaches are noteworthy and I want to make sure that they receive the appropriate care. For some of them, their bio does not include most of the information I used to construct their coaching history. But I did lean on our SID's bio to write much of the body. How can I fix this issue, I am happy to have others review or edit my drafts...but they do not need deleted. Americanfootballupdater (talk) 23:26, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
 * for creating drafts, see: Articles for Creation, you can create drafts over there, and when you think that they are ready to be published, you can submit them for review. But, remember that copyvio content isn't allowed anywhere on Wikipedia, so make sure that your drafts are free of any copyright violations. Other than that, drafts aren't usually deleted, so it's quite a safe place for improving prospective articles. All the best! Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 23:34, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I have made a few changes that ought to protect the pages. I am not trying to cause trouble. Thank you. Americanfootballupdater (talk) 23:41, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I know that you're not trying to cause any trouble, I have been assuming good faith this whole conversation. Also, I had look at Zak Kuhr, a page you have recreated, and, from the looks of it, the page doesn't have any copyright violation, well done! Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 23:47, 16 February 2018 (UTC)

Proposed deletion of Software Product Line Conference
I improved the article a little and hope it is sufficient for now, as unfortunately I will not have much time during February. I mainly translated the German article which also could do with a little more information. If it is not going to be deleted I will get back to it as soon as I have more time again. --Pachamama Sonnenkönigin (talk) 20:14, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
 * the article may be notable, so, I have removed the template. So, you don't to worry about it being deleted. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 20:23, 17 February 2018 (UTC)

DYK nomination of All India Services Act, 1951
Hello! Your submission of All India Services Act, 1951 at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Gfosankar (talk) 12:29, 18 February 2018 (UTC)

Autopatrolled granted
Hi SshibumXZ, I just wanted to let you know that I have [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Special%3ALog&type=rights&page=User%3ASshibumXZ added] the "autopatrolled" permission to your account, as you have created numerous, valid articles. This feature will have no effect on your editing, and is simply intended to reduce the workload on new page patrollers. For more information on the autopatrolled right, see Autopatrolled. Feel free to leave me a message if you have any questions. Happy editing! Alex Shih (talk) 20:35, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * thank you very much! Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 20:39, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Từ hôm nay (Feel Like Ooh)
Hello, first of all, thank you for your copy-edit on the article.

About the "and decided to release the former first" line, the producers (Krazy Park and Eddy S. Park) were only involved in the production of the song. The singer (Chi Pu) and her company were the ones that decided when and how they want to release it. The song's producers had nothing to do with the decision releasing it, especially, with the declaration that the song was "the project's 'warm-up' single." Beyoncetan (talk) 19:48, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
 * oh, ok, thanks for clarifying! I have edited the article further to imply that that it was Chi Pu and her company who decided the song's release date. You may recheck the article, and do tell me if any issues still remain to be ironed out. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 20:04, 17 February 2018 (UTC)

I took a look at Từ hôm nay (Feel Like Ooh) and made some minor changes. I suspect some of these issues were introduced from edits following your copy edit, so please forgive me if I'm telling you stuff you already know. Most of what I noticed were minor MOS issues: This stuff is all fairly minor and specific to Wikipdia's style. If you make a habit of looking for it, you'll pick it up fairly quickly, like checking punctuation at references and quotations.
 * Added and removed some commas
 * Hyphenated some compound modifiers.
 * Minor conciseness: join in the project &rarr; join the project, In many shots, the singer is often backed &rarr; In many shots, the singer is backed, and a few cases of also and still.
 * Two places had a reference on the wrong side of punctuation: throughout the track[8]; &rarr; throughout the track;[8]  Not a big deal but this can cause line-wrap problems and make it unclear what the reference is supporting.
 * Punctuation at quotations. This can take a little getting used to, but Wikipedia's Manual of Style advocates the logical quotation system (MOS:LQ).  This means that punctuation goes outside of the quote unless it is part of the actual quote.
 * Some of the quotes are actually translations. For example, with "Chi Pu's vocal is not bad, but it's as flat as a soulless sound created by a computer." the citation says that the original source is in Vietnamese.  I'm uncertain if a different treatment is recommended like a parenthetic (translated) or perhaps it would be better to paraphrase (WP:QUOTE).
 * was part of others who were supportive. changed part of others &rarr; among those. This is from a caption, another place that's easy to overlook.
 * In the list at the end, there were a couple places with a non-breaking space (&amp;nbsp;) next to a regular space, resulting in an unwanted double space.

BTW: feel free to join up for the Guild's March copy editing drive (it isn't set up yet, but that redlink will turn blue when it's ready). You don't have to be a member and there are no obligations from signing up.

Hope this helps! – Reidgreg (talk) 19:55, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * although I already knew most of these, I still would like to thank you for explaining me about the community's stance punctuations in quotes, and more importantly, about the non-breaking space.
 * As far as joining the guild is concerned, I thought about it, and it doesn't seem to be that bad an idea, the project seems fun and may very well polish my grasp over the language. Again, thank you for your notes on c/e. Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 20:35, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Great! I get a commission for everyone who signs up!  (No, not really.) – Reidgreg (talk) 20:57, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

significant coverage ???? What are you looking for?
I've illustrated that "Around the corner with john mcgivern"   Is seen by millions of people all around the USA per the references I provided.

John Mcgivern is an emmy award winning actor   listed on a separate WIKI site.

I listed as references Milwaukee, Chicago, Minneapolis, all around WI and other US states.

Yet, your groups keep sending me the same copy and paste statement    significant coverage ???? What are you looking for??

RS9999 (talk) 23:29, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 * hi, basically, the subject should have significant coverage in reliable, secondary sources. What your draft has are primary, self-published sources, so, at this point in time, it can't be published. However, if you
 * Read up on WP: Reliable sources, WP: Significant coverage, WP: General notability guidelines, and especially WP:TVSHOW, for more information. All the best! Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 00:41, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

I submitted 4 different WI news papers which have talked about this show; yet you keep saying,    self-published sources   why? The Milwaukee Journal is not a self-published sources.

So if you say 4 independent newspapers are not worthy plus an independent website then what is? I will send this along to the Milwaukee Journal because they may start to write about what WIKI will and will not publish and the push back I continue to receive.

ie Milwaukee Journal Sentinel Newsroom Staff                leading paper in Wisconsin   WI https://www.jsonline.com/pages/interactives/mjs-newsroom-staff/

RS9999 (talk) 17:27, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
 * hi, yeah, the Milwaukee Journal is not a self-published source, and yes, on second thought the would probably pass WP:GNG and WP:TVSHOW, but as it still is in a state of mess, I would recommend that you make some more improvements before submitting it for publication, however, it's totally up to you. I would not like to interfere any further than what I already have in the publication of the draft. All the best! Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 19:04, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

GOCE February 2018 news
MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 00:00, 25 February 2018 (UTC)

2018 Union budget of India
Hello:

The copy edit that you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article 2018 Union budget of India has been completed.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Good luck with the GAN

Regards,

Twofingered Typist (talk) 22:15, 24 February 2018 (UTC)
 * hi, first of all thank you for your well wishes about GAN of the article. Secondly, you have done a fantastic job, and I don't have any problem with the c/e. Thank you for the thorough c/e! Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 00:02, 25 February 2018 (UTC)

Editing News #1—2018
Read this in another language • Subscription list for the English Wikipedia • Subscription list for the multilingual edition Did you know? Did you know that you can now use the visual diff tool on any page?



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 * The visual diff tool was developed for the visual editor. It is now available to all users of the visual editor and the 2017 wikitext editor.  When you review your changes, you can toggle between wikitext and visual diffs.  You can also enable the new Beta Feature for "Visual diffs".  The Beta Feature lets you use the visual diff tool to view other people's edits on page histories and Special:RecentChanges.
 * Wikitext syntax highlighting is available as a Beta Feature for both the 2017 wikitext editor and the 2010 wikitext editor.
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 * The team is planning a presentation about editing tools for an upcoming Wikimedia Foundation metrics and activities meeting.
 * Wikibooks, Wikiversity, and other communities may have the visual editor made available by default to contributors. If your community wants this, then please contact Dan Garry.
 * The  block can automatically display long lists of references in columns on wide screens.  This makes footnotes easier to read.  This has already been enabled at the English Wikipedia.  If you want columns for a long list of footnotes on this wiki, you can use either   or the plain (no parameters)   template.  If you edit a different wiki, you can request multi-column support for your wiki.
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—User:Whatamidoing (WMF) (talk) 23:14, 28 February 2018 (UTC)

New page reviewer granted
Hello SshibumXZ. Your account has been added to the " " user group, allowing you to review new pages and mark them as patrolled, tag them for maintenance issues, or in some cases, tag them for deletion. The list of articles awaiting review is located at the New Pages Feed. New page reviewing is a vital function for policing the quality of the encylopedia, if you have not already done so, you must read the new tutorial at New Pages Review, the linked guides and essays, and fully understand the various deletion criteria. If you need more help or wish to discuss the process, please join or start a thread at page reviewer talk. The reviewer right does not change your status or how you can edit articles. If you no longer want this user right, you may ask any administrator to remove it for you at any time. In case of abuse or persistent inaccuracy of reviewing, the right can be revoked at any time by an administrator. TonyBallioni (talk) 23:30, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Please consider helping get the huge backlog down to a manageable number of pages as soon as possible.
 * Be nice to new users - they are often not aware of doing anything wrong.
 * You will frequently be asked by users to explain why their page is being deleted - be formal and polite in your approach to them too, even if they are not.
 * Don't review a page if you are not sure what to do. Just leave it for another reviewer.
 * Remember that quality is quintessential to good patrolling. Take your time to patrol each article, there is no rush. Use the message feature and offer basic advice.