User talk:Ssieg22/sandbox

Feedback from Professor Schreiber
Sophie - This is very strong work. I like that you are inserting an analysis of some of Riefenstahl's themes here but be sure to keep it as objective as possible and rely on scholarly writing whenever you can. In particular, I would be careful about using "I" (remember this is meant to be an encyclopedia entry). Also, be sure to cite your sources using the correct formatting. MJSProf (talk) 14:42, 16 April 2018 (UTC)