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Peer Review by Mallory
I think that Professional mourning is a great topic as there is little information on the page and you can truly do a lot with it. I read over the page and I think that you can restructure it completely. For example, you can add a little to the lead section. Then, I would add a Religion section where you can breakdown what professional/paid mourning looks like in each religion, similar to what mentioned in her peer review with Christianity and Judaism. Under the Christianity section, definitely add one or two Bible verses. I would also link the verses to the specific book of the Bible in case someone reading the article wants to know more about Amos, or another book.

I am not sure if you have found anything in your research, but have professional mourners existed within cultural contexts? If so, after the religion section you could add a section to explain the cultural significance and break that down by country/geography/culture. You might be able to tie in the concept of getting paid or social status, especially for women. Although our class is focused on religion, I think tidying up the Popular Culture section to be beyond bullet points would also be beneficial for the article. Best of luck with your article! maljohns (talk) 20:19, 18 March 2018 (UTC)