User talk:Ssutton27

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Hello, Ssutton27, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Culture of the Hawaiian people
Hi! I saw that you moved your sandbox work live, however it looks like it's a section rather than a page in and of itself. Also, keep in mind that there is already an article on the Culture of the Native Hawaiian. This page doesn't need a section about the geography of Hawaii (ie, just geography), as there's already a main article on this. I would recommend that you instead work on a section about the history of Hawaii's culture. So for example, a section like this could have content such as this:


 * Information on how the different cultures has impacted the native culture, on how the Polynesian culture has impacted the native culture- and how it has changed over time. You could also include how the native culture has impacted the overall culture of the Hawaiian Islands and how geography has impacted the culture. For example, have any of the islands been remote enough from the others to where the culture developed differently?

Also of note is that you should avoid point of view terms like beautiful, as this will be subjective to the reader. While some may agree with the description (I would), there are also those who would not. At the very least using terms like this comes across as non-neutral. I've moved your work back to your userspace for the time being.

I hope this all helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:52, 14 October 2019 (UTC)