User talk:Stabbey

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The article for Fallout is supposed to be a summary of the events, not a play by play. the "weird stuff" i was refering to was the sudden change in Grammatical person and how you seemed to copy word for word from the show in the article. Again, this is a summary. We got everything that is important. Perhaps some things can be worded better, or a few added details here or there, but we overall did a wonderful job.

There were way too many fragments to fix. Believe me, i tried, and it just got way too confusing. So, i reverted your edits, except for the paragraph relating to Clarie and Peters visit in jail which i thought was a good edition. I'm sorry if you are angry, but i think it would be best if we can work together on this. A revert/edit war would not be a good thing. How about it? Let's work together and try to make the fallout article great. ok? dposse 00:53, 7 December 2006 (UTC)


 * If the dialoge wasn't exactly correct, then make those small edits. Those are the kinda "details" i was refering to. Second, it is already in the article that Nikki apologized and gave herself up to the police. Just saying "They reconciled." doesn't do it. It's not only poor writing, but it messes up the flow and doesn't do the scene justice.

"When Niki realizes that Micah is hurt, she takes over and apologizes to her family for putting them in danger. "

That sentence keeps the flow of the article and explains that they made up.

If you wish to add the "other bad men" thing, go ahead. but, please keep it in the same style of writing as the rest of the article so i dont have to spend a hour correcting your mistakes.

I'm sorry if that sounds rude, im not trying to be. Just had a very rough day. dposse 19:50, 7 December 2006 (UTC)


 * That's what i'm talking about! Very nice. Go ahead and add it. dposse 21:30, 7 December 2006 (UTC)