User talk:Steinhau.natalie/sandbox

Morgan's Peer Review
Intro - good info; some quotes could be paraphrased for clarity

History -"experienced worker train the incoming"; should be "trains" or "workers" -I like the historical context

Formal vs. Informal -Formal: -maybe examples of companies/occupation -concise and informative -Informal: -last sentence a little lengthy -maybe examples of companies/occupations

Additional Types -Relational: -good -Reverse: -define "older" and "younger" to clarify "younger" has more experience; I thought new comers were training veteran employees on new software, creativity, etc.

Pros and Cons -Pros: -"it can create and experience"; should be "an"? -good info -Cons: -good info; easy to understand

Possible Additions -I like the info you have here; could be incorporated well if shortened and paraphrased

General Comments -good structure; makes sense; general to more in depth -possible bullets for pro/con section to make it easier to read Kuske.morgan (talk) 20:13, 1 April 2018 (UTC)