User talk:Stellalqx

Hello (BarrieMichelle (talk) 16:43, 25 September 2012 (UTC))

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Hi there! Damatucci (talk) 16:37, 11 November 2012 (UTC)

Your page on communication accommodation theory looks like it's already really robust! One thing that struck me as I was initially scanning the page was that there is a lot of information in large blocks of text, which makes it a bit difficult to read. I am wondering if it would make the page look cleaner if you broke up the large amounts of text into smaller paragraphs (eg: under 'Convergence', maybe you could make that three paragraphs instead of one. Damatucci (talk) 16:42, 11 November 2012 (UTC)

Additionally, I am wondering if there are any images you could add to spice up the page. I know this might be difficult because Wikipedia is very strict when it comes to images, but is there maybe a picture you can take yourself that encompasses some ideas about the theory and add? Just a thought! Damatucci (talk) 16:48, 11 November 2012 (UTC)

Hi Stella! Your page looks great! One thing I noticed while you were editing the paper is that some of the references seem a bit old. One idea maybe to look for references within the last five years. Additionally, I agree with Dorothy's comment - adding bullets points may make the page easier to read so that the article can be assessed by Wikipedia. Furthermore, adding internal links within wikipedia would help the article be assessed by Wikipedia. Overall, the page looks awesome! Reinamg (talk) 04:28, 13 November 2012 (UTC)