User talk:Stephcal/sandbox

For this article I like the fact that the story was analyzed and you spoke about gender stereotype, gender socialization, patriarchy, language, femininity and masculinity. It is also seen where you had a different title for each topic, very organized.

In paragraph 1, Line 3 it could be changed to 'while these stories are intended to be entertainment for children'.

References could be added to gender stereotype and heteronormativity.

In paragraph 2 of patriarchy, line 1 there was a full stop after 'the story', it should be changed to a full stop

A minor error where there was a space in line 2 of caribbean masculinity and heteronormativity that needs changing.

Island.virago (talk) 05:56, 29 March 2021 (UTC)