User talk:Stephendineen

Dear User Stephendineen,

Thank you for your extenisve updates to the article Water supply and sanitation in Ireland. These updates are very valuable, as the article did not reflect the latest reforms in the Irish water sector. However, I noticed that the lead section - the part at the beginning of the article before the table of content - is now very long and I suggest that you shorten it and move some of the information that you added to the main body of the article in appropriate sections, existing or new ones. Also, there are no references for some of the information that you added. Please add appropriate references. I also noticed that some references are inserted in the text, instead of using the proper format for references. I will fix some of them for you so that you can see how it works. Finally, if you continue to edit this and other articles, I suggest that you do the changes gradually and save them frequently, while describing what you changed in the field "Edit summary". This will make editing more transparent for other users. I hope that you find these comments useful. Feel free to respond on this page. Happy editing!--Mschiffler (talk) 11:40, 31 August 2013 (UTC)

Dear User Mschiffler, Many thanks for your suggestions. Unfortunately I was slightly rushed with the edit on the day I inserted the text but hope to get back to editing it now. Thanks again. Regards, Stephendineen