User talk:Stephenpenndb7

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Draft
Hey, welcome to Wikipedia! :) I saw your post about wanting feedback on your draft, and I was wondering if I could make some edits to it. It would probably be just minor formatting/grammar/sentence structure edits. Sound good? ~EdGl   &#9733;  01:57, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
 * That would be great, thanks, any help improving the article would be appreciated Stephenpenndb7 (talk) 08:03, 30 April 2010 (UTC)

Your Draft
Welcome to Wikipedia mate :). I saw that you asked for feedback on your draft and I would say it's mostly coming along well. As it stands it seems like a fairly decent article with references, etc. There are a few minor mistakes, for example when you're listing the institutions it would probably be better to use links to the Wikipedia articles instead of using external links (where an article exists or could exist it's always preferable to use links to the article and not external links). Apart from that maybe a bit of cleanup would help, just minor formatting stuff. Anyway if you wanted to move it to an actual article now it might get tagged for cleanup but I doubt anyone would complain too much. Would it be fine by you if I made a few edits to the draft? - EdoDodo  talk 05:47, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Feel free to make some edits, I'll move it to an actual article after you've had a look at it. Cheers Stephenpenndb7 (talk) 08:05, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Hey again, I've done the changes I wanted to do (here). Hope they're all fine with you, feel free to revert any of them if they're not, since it's still in your userspace. If you want to move it to an article I think it's looking fine for the start of an article. Happy editing. - EdoDodo  talk 14:16, 30 April 2010 (UTC)