User talk:Stephxm/Telecommunications in the Republic of the Congo

[Jio's peer review] 1. What was good about this article is the amount of figures that are provided. I like that must of the information is presented in a concise manner, as it is easier to put into perspective. I also liked that many of the different mediums of telecommunications are separated accordingly in the article. I also liked that there was more written on the internet segment, as it gave more information and context, like with the mention of former presidents Abbe Fulbert Youlouand Alphonse Massamba-Debat. Related incidents such as the shutdowns was also insightful and an interesting read, particularly about the political implications regarding the election. I think this should be expanded further if possible. 2. While the presentation of figures is certainly concise, I think it might be beneficial to preface with a sentence or phrase such as 'Below are the figures that show how many radio stations exist in the Republic of the Congo'. This would make it easier to understand the context of what is being presented. 3. I think the most important thing that can be done is to condense the figures and present them in a clearer fashion. Perhaps opening with internet might be more beneficial as well, because this seems to be the most relevant mode of telecommunications, as well as with the most information. 4. I think the presentation of the article is concise, and what is written under the internet segment is well-organized. The radio/telephone sections are a bit more difficult to comprehend with the amount of numbers presented. 5. I think for my own article, I would love to also present figures in a concise fashion. 6. Personally, I think the last segment was the most interesting, with the intentional shutdowns. It provides insight into how the government is handling elections and delves deeper into the political implications of completely shutting down the internet.

Jilee99 (talk) 23:37, 31 March 2022 (UTC) Jio