User talk:Stevehhaigh

Wat Pha Sorn Kaew
Hi Steve, I enjoyed reading your article Wat Pha Sorn Kaew, well done on it!

I did a little bit of cleanup on the article. If you plan to write a lot of articles here (and I hope you do!), you may wish to read the page Manual of Style/Words to watch. This page tells you to try to avoid using phrases like, say, "breathtaking location" or "beautiful scenery". While you and I might agree that the scenery is indeed beautiful, it's not very neutral (it might make Wikipedia read like a travel guide for the area), and it's not verifiable (there is no measurement of beauty, so something we might find attractive, another person might not!). Basically, a statement of well-written bald facts is preferable to too much description. I think that, since you've provided those lovely pictures, it's best to let the reader form their own opinion of the beauty of the location :)

Again, thanks for the article, and I hope you write many more. Please feel free to ask me on my talkpage if you have any questions. ~ Riana ⁂ 12:13, 5 May 2013 (UTC)