User talk:Stevenzhang4949/Cultural imperialism

Hello Steven! I understand you have not completed your draft yet, but this topic was similar to mine so I was curious about it. Regarding your article, the information added is relevant to the definition of cultural imperialism. It is necessary to organize the content and to add more sources. Also, it is important to avoid having a position against cultural imperialism, I know it can be hard since it is a negative term, but on Wikipedia, we are only limited to define the term and add examples. Use more neutral positions when talking about cultural imperialism. Also, you can add images to make it more interactive. For example, when giving your example of McDonald's you can add their logo as an image. You can use cultural imperialism and globalization as a header, and cultural imperialism and commerce as another header as well. Finally, do not forget to add more sources, we have to have at least 5 sources. Good luck!Ali.panta (talk) 05:07, 8 May 2020 (UTC)Alicia Panta

Hello Steven! I did Peer Review for your draft, and I think you did a great job! Your content is very clear and directly related to the original article. I know you are still working on it so I think you can add more sources to support your content. Also, I believe we cannot use direct quotes in Wikipedia and you can find more information regarding this issue on one of the training. You can also add images to further enhance your content. Good Luck! Xibaowang (talk) 06:39, 11 May 2020 (UTC)Xibao Wang