User talk:Sthomas17/sandbox

Notes: Kansas Territory

- Some of the writing in awkward and clunky, there are sentences that appear grammatically incorrect or incomplete.

- While all the information on the article was relevant, the article should have stood to go more in depth about the things it mentioned

- The information was up-to-date

- While the article is neutral in the it could have provided more detail about the opposing viewpoints

- There are not nearly enough citations to account for all of the information provided

- The talk page is very sparse, its just some fact-checking questions about the origins of Kansas' statehood

- The article was apart of three wikiprojsects and it has a C-class rating

- The article doesn't get nearly as in depth as in-class discussion did about all the various moving pieces that comprised Kansas' journey to statehood