User talk:Stillber/sandbox

Hello,

It seems you have put in a considerable amount of time and effort into this article. I like the articles introduction to the book with some information on the author. Is there a Wikipedia page for this author that you could link this text to? I know there are existing articles on the various publishers you have listed in the first paragraph that could have links. I recognize that this is most likely something you have not thought about yet. Your article was an interesting read that prompted me to want to read this book. I think it would be wise to add in actual subheadings for each summary of each short story. Then these summaries would be more recognizable as summaries and the articles overall structure would be more organized. This may be something you already plan on doing, but I still thought I would point it out! Otherwise, each summary is written clearly and effectively.

Overall great work! I’m excited to see the finished product.

Kenzieballantyne (talk) 19:29, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

Hello there,

It really looks like you've put a ton of work into this article and that's super good. What I would recommend for you to work on once you publish this is to clean-up the general layout of the article you're publishing. I would recommend splitting up what you have already into some more specific categories, such as publication history, themes and motifs, and major characters. You can also add a picture of the cover page which can open up a whole new area of information to lay down. Aside from that though, it looks really good so far!

--Samfbrown (talk) 20:09, 4 October 2017 (UTC)