User talk:Stirling1716/sandbox

Review
I like the subject of the article a lot! analytics is a fun topic and hockey analytics is really under-explored. I have some comments on the draft: Thanks, Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:55, 27 October 2014 (UTC)
 * I think the tone of the sections may be a bit out of place on wikipedia. We're sort of a staid and plain resource, so "big names of analytics..." could better be described as procedures or computed stats (we couldn't call "Value over replacement player" a big name in baseball analytics).
 * the first section of the article doesn't need a heading (the article title will be displayed at the top of the page anyway)
 * I realize the field is new, but do we have any information on teams employing this in the field (a la the A's as early sabermetrics proponents)? We mention this in the article but don't get specific.
 * Is the name "advanced stats" very common, or is analytics more common? the title is advanced analytics, but we seem to use "advanced stats" is a fair number of places in the article.