User talk:Stlamers/sandbox

- peer review - Hi this is Jessica Rogoff! I think you have done a great job with the article so far! I think that the examples of records and unique facts in the youtube section really demonstrates how special kpop is in this form of social media. For the twitter section, you could possibly expand more on other bands who may have popular twitter pages or talk more about how the twitter pages are used to gather fans. Are the twitter pages mostly advertising? Also, what kinds of things are posted on the facebook pages? You could expand on who runs these pages as well! So far the article is really great!:) Jrogoff2 (talk) 15:00, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

Hkim856 (talk) 14:10, 19 October 2018 (UTC) This article is well sourced and structured. I piggyback one of the comments above on the facebook pages. Your article gives some information on who runs these pages, but as a reader, I'd be more interested in knowing how specifically entertainment companies use these pages for promotion. Perhaps give one or two quick examples?

A minor concern: there's another student who has also been working on this issue, and I wonder if you two would be interested in collaboration? (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Evaneee06152/sandbox)

Peer Review- PM
I really like your article, its quite well-developed and clear. I also like that you're specific when talking about different media platforms. I would say that maybe adding more to the section "Social Media" would make it even more interesting. Overall it's a good and informing wiki article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by PamelaMalasi (talk • contribs) 22:49, 7 November 2018 (UTC)